Wednesday, May 18, 2016

The legend of the moon

Long, long ago Henry and Josh hated the huge boulder blocking the sunlight. So then they went to the forest to see Tāne. So they brought him to the boulder and asked him to push it into the sky. So Tāne pushed with all his might and then he sadly said I can't push it into the sky. Then they went and got Hercules. They brought him to the boulder. Hercules pushed and pushed with all his might then Zeus came and pushed it into the sky. Now that's how the moon became the moon. The end

1 comment:

  1. What a creative legend Henry. Have you read your story out loud? When I read it I noticed you have used SO to start a few sentences. Next time have a go at re-crafting.